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Post by Mirul on Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:10 pm

LastQuestions:

1.walking-something-went-saw
2.broken wing-fly-felt-took
3.showed-cleaned-bandaged-helped
4.lloked after-decided-free-away

MY ANSWER: Wink

Jin Hau is a hardworking and caring person.He school at SK Bukit Fraser.He live with his family in a small village near to his school.

One day as he was walking on his way home from school,he heard a louded crash nearby.He decided to see what happened.he went to the place where he heard the loud crash.He saw a bird on the ground.

The bird had broken its wing.The bird tried to fly but it fell on the ground.Jin Hau felt pity to the little bird.Then,he took the bird home.

He showed the sick bird to Mrs. Cheng who was his mother.His mother cleaned the place where the bird sick.He helped his mother bandaged the bird's wing.

After a month he looked after the bird,the bird had vanished from its ill.He decided to free the bird away.

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Re: Pliz help me

Post by eve on Wed Jan 20, 2010 1:59 pm

Mirul wrote:LastQuestions:

1.walking-something-went-saw
2.broken wing-fly-felt-took
3.showed-cleaned-bandaged-helped
4.lloked after-decided-free-away

MY ANSWER: Wink

Jin Hau is a hardworking and caring person.He is schooling at SK Bukit Fraser.He live with his family in a small village near to his school.

One day as he was walking on his way home from school,he heard a louded crash nearby.He decided to see what happened.he went to the place where he heard the loud crash.He saw a bird on the ground.

The bird had broken its wing.The bird tried to fly but it fell on the ground.Jin Hau felt pity to the little bird.Then,he took the bird home.

He showed the sick bird to Mrs. Cheng who was his mother.His mother cleaned the place where the bird sick.He helped his mother bandaged the bird's wing.

After a month he looked after the bird,the bird had vanished from its ill.He decided to free the bird away.


Dear Mirul...we are very sorry that it really took time to get to you. Anyway, your writing is okay, you just need more practice. The sentence in red color means, there you have mistake, it can be the sentence structure or simpy the word used and it is really minor mistake.

All the best my dear.Practice makes perfect okay...so keep it up.

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