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Post by ayumi on Sat Sep 05, 2009 12:36 pm

This is my homework. I need you all help me check for mistake grammar, preposition,nouns, pronouns and phrases Shocked

Question : How to make a Toast

My answer :

1. Firstly, decide what type of bread that you like to use for making your toast. The only bread that can use is a regular white bread, or specialty bread like whole wheat.

2. Once you have selected your bread, decide how many pieces of toast you want. Place your slices of bread in the toaster.

3. Then, press your toaster's lever down until it catches and set the level of the toaster.

4. When the toasting is completed, your toasted bread should jump out of the slots.

5. Next, you'll want to carefully remove toast from slots and place onto a plate.

6. Use the knife to put on whatever topping you like. Spread toast with butter, peanut butter, jam or whatever you prefer on one side. If you put on the topping while your toast is still warm it will spread easier.

7. When its all done, your bread now is ready to serve.
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Re: Can You All Check My HomeWork? Plz

Post by eve on Wed Jan 20, 2010 2:04 pm

Well done. You are doing just fine.
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Post by be_map1512 on Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:31 pm

send your ex to your teacher:)
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Post by Dgku.Nur Adlina on Sat Jul 21, 2012 9:53 am

you've done well.I impressed. Very Happy

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Re: Can You All Check My HomeWork? Plz

Post by upsr et on Fri Jul 27, 2012 11:29 pm

ayumi wrote:This is my homework. I need you all help me check for mistake grammar, preposition,nouns, pronouns and phrases Shocked

Question : How to make a Toast

My answer :

1. Firstly, decide what type of bread that you would like to use for making your toast. The only breads that you can use is regular white bread or specialty bread like wholewheat bread.

2. Once you have selected your bread, decide how many pieces of toast you want. Place your slices of bread in the toaster.

3. Then, press your toaster's lever down until it catches and set the level of the toaster.

4. When the toasting is completed, your toasted bread should jump out of the slots.

5. Next, carefully remove toast from slots and place onto a plate.

6. Use the knife to put on whatever topping you like. Spread toast with butter, peanut butter, jam or whatever you prefer on one side. If you put on the topping while your toast is still warm it will spread easier.

7. When it�s all done, your bread is now ready to serve.
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Re: Can You All Check My HomeWork? Plz

Post by magickabu on Sun Jul 29, 2012 9:51 pm

ayumi wrote: ayumi's answers:

1. Firstly, decide what type of bread that you like to use for making your toast. The only bread that can use is a regular white bread, or specialty bread like whole wheat.

4. When the toasting is completed, your toasted bread should jump out of the slots.

5. Next, you'll want to carefully remove toast from slots and place onto a plate .

NOTE: The Underlined Word Is What I'm Trying To Point To.

1. "Firstly". I recommend you to use "First" than "Firstly" because "First" sounds better.

4. "You'll want to carefully". I'm still searching if this sentence could be use but I think the "carefully" will sound better if that word moved to the last one. " You'll want to remove the toasts from slots and place onto a plate carefully."


Note #002: I didn't say your sentence is wrong. All of them are my thoughts.

Note #003: Sorry about some underlined sentence , I can't edit that thing , really sorry. *EDITED

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Re: Can You All Check My HomeWork? Plz

Post by Admin on Sun Jul 29, 2012 10:22 pm

tq magickabu... by the way, you can edit your own post...

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Re: Can You All Check My HomeWork? Plz

Post by magickabu on Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:06 pm

LOL admin , just call me daniel XD, i checked and can't find where i did i put that "[ u ]" code. luckily u helped me.
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Re: Can You All Check My HomeWork? Plz

Post by rabiasensei on Fri Sep 28, 2012 8:09 pm

Ayumi, there is another suggestion;

1. First, decide what type of bread that you like to use for
making your toast. The only bread that you can use is regular white
bread or specialty bread like wholewheat bread.

2. Once you have
selected your bread, decide how many pieces of toast that you want. Place
your slices of bread in the toaster.

3. Then, press your
toaster's lever down and set the level of the toaster.

4. Wait a few minutes for the toast to pop up out of the toaster.







Thanks.
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